Thursday 18 February 2016

First Day of School Description



Welcome to my blog.
This year I want to achieve on my learning. This is because I want to learn more things and different things. I also want to do good moves and use my skills on my learning, sports and other things.
I hope that you enjoy my blog and you comment on my work.

My Reflection

I was learning to add details and use my senses in my writing.
I think I had use enough details in my story and use my senses to make it more interesting.
My next step is to add different types of language futures like similes and adjectives. 






Monday 1 February 2016