Wednesday, 28 October 2015

Aurthor Bias

Biased Opinion

A New Student was a Hero!!

Laura Mini, a student that was new to school was a great hero when she had saved a grandmother from getting crushed by a car.
It all started when the end of school bell rang. Laura had just got out from the school and was walking down the footpath when suddenly a strange scream came out from the road. Laura checked who it was and just then she saw a grandmother crossing the road and a car just about to crush her. She needed cross the road before the car crosses her so Laura zoomed right to her and speed across the road right before car zoomed across. The Grandmother thanked Laura, gave Laura a big hug and then she said, " You are truly a hero." And that's how Laura became a hero.


Balanced Opinion


What Really Happened

Laura Mini was a new kid to school. When she was about walk back home she heard someone yell help. She went to check who it was and it was a old lady trying to cross the road. She noticed that a car was about drive through on the same road that the old lady was on. Laura started panicking but then she knew that she should help the old lady cross the road. So Laura went off giving the lady a hand. 
Once they had crossed the road the old lady thanked Laura and said, " You are very helpful my dear."  And that's the story of how Laura helped a old lady out.

Thursday, 22 October 2015

Writing Description

Writing Description

GREG

Greg the misarable, stincky, old man was a lump of stinky old slime. His uniform was made of dirty, scratched up fabrics and when you look at him, his not so handsome face would make you run like the wind. He moves like a snail, shoulders dropped like as if it weights a ton and rides on a broken, wooden bike. His eyes are as dark as a terrible, stormy nightmare, his ears are as floppy as a flag flopping about through the wind. When he smiles ( although he doesn't ) you can see a HUGE hole from a rotten teeth. Greg was a careless old man who drives people BATS!!!




Tuesday, 20 October 2015

T4W2 Blog Recount

Fantastic Friday
"RIIIIINNGGG!" That was the sound of the playtime bell ringing out of CONTROL!! I saw children getting ready for something but what? RIGHT it was FANTASTIC FRIDAY! All the Year 3's,4's,5's and 6's were going WANKERS around the shade area finding their line to their activities. 

First I tried finding my line to my activity. My activity was sewing and wool crafts. I was so exited that I almost blew the roof of my head off. I checked if one of my friends were here and there was Mandy one of my friends and classmate. She looked lonely so I talked with her while we waited for the teacher that was leading the activity.

Just a moment later a teacher had arrived and said some questions like," Is this my group for sewing?, Are you all coming with me?, Are you all going to Rm 19 or 20?"

Once we had answered the questions we went into the room of COLORS and sat on the mat. One of the teachers told us what to do, oh sorry there was actually two teachers, any way back to the story, so the teacher told us what we will be sewing. At first I didn't understand what we were going to make but then the teacher ( Mrs Rist ) explained what it was. It was a called pot mitt. A pot mitt  is something that protects your hand from hotness of a pot so that means when your carrying a boiling pot and you need something to protect your hand you will need a pot mitt.

After that Mrs Rist showed us the different type of fabrics that we could use to make a pot mitt. There was lots of striped pattern fabrics, fabrics with castle on them and colorful fabrics too. I chose the colorful striped pattern fabric.

When everyone chose their fabric and sat down on the mat Mrs Rist showed us how to sew. It looked difficult but really it was actually simple! First I got a string from the other teacher (Mrs tjaliad.) Then I got help from Mrs Rist on tying the string. Then I started sewing  Up and Down, Up and Down, Up and Down, Up and Down. 
When I reached to the end I had sew back again:O I groaned,"AAHHH" and I started sewing back again. 

As I finished the sewing I went to Mrs Rist and she finished off by writing my name on a sticky note and pasting it on my fabric.

Just then the bell rang and everyone sat down on the mat ready to go back to their classes. The teachers had let us go back to our  classes and our class end the day off with the karakia.

I think it was a great idea to have FANTASTIC FRIDAY and I had so much fun doing sewing, making pot mitt, learning new things about sewing and having fun. 


Monday, 19 October 2015

Fact or Opinion Follow-up


My Reflection

I am learning about facts and opinions.
I had to read a slideshow that tells information about facts and opinions and then fill in the follow up.
I found this tricky because this is kind of new to me.
My next step is to use facts and opinion in writing.

Wednesday, 14 October 2015

My Holidays

"........" THAT was the sound of silence, nothing to do except being miserable and lazy UNTIL..... 
BOOM, SLAM, THUMP went the door as a living object that looked like my baby cousin came stomping in. It was my baby cousin who started yelling, "HI!!!" 

Image result for trampolineAs he came in another living object came walking in she was my auntie. We all JUMPED UP and raced to the back yard. Once we made it to our backyard I wanted to go on the BOUNCY tramp so we climbed up to the tramp and started jumping up and down. As I was jumping I could feel the freezing air coming to my face.

First we started chasing each other screaming and laughing. Then we got really bored on chasing each other so we played a game. We played a game with my ball and we played a game of crack the egg and also just jumped around.

Next we went to a playground around Lloyd Elsmore. We were really excited. Once we came into the playground I went on the swings. I could feel butterflies in my tummy while I was swinging," WOOHOO" I said as I let go of the swing and landed perfectly on the ground. 

When I started getting bored on the swings I went to go and play with my brother and sister. We went on the HUGE bright yellow swing. The butterflies in my tummy flied away but cold air came into my eyes which was a little twitchy and painful.

Half an hour of crying, laughing and doing crazy things in the playground our auntie shouted," COME ON KIDS WE HAVE TO GO NOW!" So we went back home.

Once we had arrived back home our baby cousin and auntie had to leave:( 

Did you had something like this when your cousin or an auntie comes to your house and you go to the playground or something similar to my day. Well I had fun and hopefully you did too.

Maths-Probability


My Reflection
I am learning about probability. We had to play the maths game Yahtzee and then do a follow up on probability with Yahtzee. I found this a little challenging because I never played Yahtzee before and I also got confused with some of the questions. My next step is to use probability in a different situation. 

Facts Finding in Non-Fiction Text Follow-up


My Reflection

I am learning to use the 5W questions to help me find the main ideas in the articles. I had to fill in the 5W questions and then write a summary. I thought it was easy because I found the 5W quickly.
My next step is to make more longer and detailed summary.